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TIAA CREF Sample
Warren & Associates Sample
Health Check/N.C. Health Choice

Excerpt from a TIAA CREF letter :

BEFORE...
If you turn age 701/2 this year, federal minimum distribution rules generally require that you receive some income from your retirement plan accumulations by April 1 following the year you turn 701/2 — April 1, 2007 — or the April 1 after the year you retire,* whichever comes later. Although April 2007 is the deadline, you can receive your minimum distribution in 2006. If you wait until 2007 to receive your minimum distribution for 2006, you will receive two payments in 2007. One payment will satisfy the minimum distribution requirement for 2006 and another payment will satisfy the 2007 requirement. You must also begin receiving income by April 1, 2007, regardless of your employment status, from any accumulations in TIAA-CREF’s Traditional IRAs or other companies’ traditional IRAs, or from qualified plans (including Keogh plans) if you are a 5% owner of the plan. If you turned age 70 1/2 before 2006, you must receive enough income by December 31 of each year to satisfy minimum distribution requirements. Keep in mind, even if you have already received some income from your TIAA-CREF accumulations this year, you may need to take an additional distribution...

 

AFTER...
We are writing to you because you are subject to the minimum distribution requirements of the Internal Revenue Code. Under these rules, once you turn age 70.1/2, you must receive some income from your accounts each year. Since you are or will be 70 1/2 or older this year, you need to receive at least a minimum amount of income. The following shows when you need to receive this income based on your age:

If you turn 70 1/2 in 2007
Your minimum distribution income
must begin by April 1, 2008

If you turn 70 1/2 in 2006 or earlier
Your minimum distribution income
must begin by December 31, 2007

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Excerpt from a Warren & Associates Style Manual:

Warren & Associates: We created a company style guide that helps their analysts write reports that
are more readable and more visually appealing.

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Health Check/NC Health Choice Application Form:

Health Check (Medicaid) and NC Health Choice for Children provide free or low cost health insurance to children and teens who qualify.The original form was difficult to fill-out, poorly designed, too wordy, and included too much jargon.

Applying Simplified Communication strategies, we redesigned this form to solve the formatting, style, and content issues. Tests have shown that the new form is easier to understand, more easily filled out, and less likely to lead to incorrect answers.

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